zodiac6 Aug 2005

Maybe you don't want to, but if you DID want to make this poem EVEN BETTER you might make the following edits:

Breathe => breath,
Planning about your perfect life => Planning your perfect life,
dreamt => dreamed,
it to => it would,
.. => [nothing],
long => longer,
.. => [nothing],
punctuation throughout.

Just a suggestion. I really enjoyed seeing what it would be like to live pointlessly. -10-