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SO LONG MY BELOVED (Free verse) by prettyktm

So long my beloved I'm going to fight A war which isn't mine But a man has got to do His duites you see So save your tears For the better time So long my beloved Thanks for the food Thanks for the wine Kiss me now,kiss me warm 'Cause they'll help me In the winter time And keep me alive in your heart 'Cause I don't know when I've be back So long my beloved Pray for me and for this time Say a prayer for the enemies too 'Cause they're even humans Just like me and you And don't cry when I'm gone Just remember this isn't my war.

prettyktm 3-Aug-05/11:25 PM
HA HA,if we all started believeing that all the words which are
written in poetry are right and we should follow it,then why do
not humans fall the poetry of love.and also don't forget the four
lines in my poem which goes....'Pray for me and for the enemies too,Cause they're even humans like me and you...'




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