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After He Left (Free verse) by Dovina

Whether he really went somewhere or where, I couldn't tell. Only his possesseions remain. Perhaps that's why I hord the world in words with hope that when I die the sum suggests a larger life than lived - a healthy afterlife existing after imagination.

Dovina 3-Aug-05/7:42 AM
I'll change remain to remained. Thanks.




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