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SO LONG MY BELOVED (Free verse) by prettyktm

So long my beloved I'm going to fight A war which isn't mine But a man has got to do His duites you see So save your tears For the better time So long my beloved Thanks for the food Thanks for the wine Kiss me now,kiss me warm 'Cause they'll help me In the winter time And keep me alive in your heart 'Cause I don't know when I've be back So long my beloved Pray for me and for this time Say a prayer for the enemies too 'Cause they're even humans Just like me and you And don't cry when I'm gone Just remember this isn't my war.

zodiac 3-Aug-05/5:38 AM
Hi, if you want to talk the language of love and peace, I'd say stop talking about "this isn't my war but I've gotta go cause a man's gotta do his duty and kill people who are just doing their duties and so on and so on". That's what lets wars happen. Personally, I'd pack up for Canada, see what they do when they don't have any more suckers to shoot out of their cannons.




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