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What?! (Free verse) by drnick

The moons view is one of wonder Leaving limes for the undercover Drinking dreams we throw them up I can't feel for you I'm sick of love Lonely roads dont have those lights Its easier to see the stars and kites String 'em up and we cut it loose Why have the choice if we never choose

drnick 2-Aug-05/10:29 AM
You know what would be awesome? If you could be technical and completely RUIN EVERYTHING...you're completely right, not choosing is a choice...I meant it to be more like, "why have the choice if you always choose to do nothing and waste away into oblivion?" However, I don't think that rhymes. I put up a new poem for you to hate so enjoy ripping that one apart too.




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