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she sits back and judges me (Free verse) by hendrimike

and then i open the door sitting on the leather she ponders and i stroll past her quickly feeling eyes penetrating my life and i close my door and i hear her head attack me and i fall asleep and sleep is a mirage to life

pennymarie 1-Aug-05/11:35 AM
maybe needs a little more descriptive wording to get a really good mental picture

penny




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