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Thoughts (Free verse) by drnick

Darker it becomes The deeper you go That which you seek Is that which will grow Infinite trails and motionless travel Intelectual opinions And mindless babble Sure you will find A tormented soul Shattered dreams Which once were whole Constantly searching Through what is known But what you seek Has yet to be shown

ALChemy 1-Aug-05/3:32 AM
Ditch the third verse. This is a thinkers poem. There's no place for melodrama. The last line isn't much of a revelation and it could end many different ways and still be as thought prevoking. ie. "is to not be alone" or "will never be shown" or "is the journey your on". The answer of answers should be a big surprise even if it's not.




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