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This Just In... (Free verse) by drnick

What's in the news today? The best stories of our days, Blood death and voilent years, Dollar bills can dry your tears, It's a dark world, or is it? Can reality be so explicit? Who would know behind these screens, Expierience the world in electric dreams, Feel yourself just waste away, A story I heard on the news today.

drnick 31-Jul-05/8:55 AM
Ya, I noticed the lack of a comma after I posted it. I was trying to point out how the news delivers us only what they want us to see, which is usually nothing to be happy about. To me, it seems as though they are trying to make the world seem worse than it really is. Maybe you've never seen the news.




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