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ReplyTo a comment on Then what is the sleeve? by T. Jonathron Remp.

LilMsLadyPoet31 Jul 2005

Sorry...this thought was Far too free for me...so disconnected...too disconnected to make sense out of.
My favorite line was>
"The flesh-covered oven hovered as I sat
And watched as they pried the g from the front of the gnat"
Although I wouldn't have used AS two times, and perhaps would have shortened the line with a word change here or there.