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The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) (Free verse) by drnick

Peaches sitting in the attack... waiting to attack a lone plum A Doe, a deer! It swizzles thru your brain canals A blue raccoon is nibbleing at your flesh WHATCH OUT! ~~~Charlie in the trees~~~ hit the fuckin' floor, man. FREEDOM! Look everyone! It's Mr. Peanut!!!! He wants an orgasm.

drnick 29-Jul-05/10:09 AM
You're right, the last part does ruin it, especially the last line. Thank you.




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