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Noble oboe now sings every next saturday evening (Free verse) by ALChemy

Pale meadows streaming blue waves of Tuscany dreams fellowships embark upon the Moonbeam Starship Satellite willows lead the way to home and lost memories what pure delight.

LilMsLadyPoet 26-Jul-05/10:32 PM
I thought the use of 'upon the Moonbeam Starship Satellite" a little long-winded..and ? unclear...otherwise I like it. I was thinking...> upon the moonbeamed__________ (something).




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