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Noble oboe now sings every next saturday evening
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Free verse
) by
ALChemy
Pale meadows streaming blue waves of Tuscany dreams fellowships embark upon the Moonbeam Starship Satellite willows lead the way to home and lost memories what pure delight.
LilMsLadyPoet
26-Jul-05/10:32 PM
I thought the use of 'upon the Moonbeam Starship Satellite" a little long-winded..and ? unclear...otherwise I like it. I was thinking...> upon the moonbeamed__________ (something).
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