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Happy Charlene (Free verse) by Dovina

Sensuous fluffy clouds wrap the earth in soft embrace where birds sing for joy and all things produce good The earth is a white padded room where all injustice falls before her And any gloom will soon aright She loves it so— a world devoid of hope for good is already accomplished beautiful and purely white

jessicazee 13-Jul-05/11:11 PM
Tell me why the clouds are "sensuous" without the word "fluffy" (which conjures kittens and toilet tissue). Maybe this is a free-form ode to a friend, or you read my brother's 1985 diary when he had a Charlene Tilton obsession? Either way, I want to meet her. She sounds awesome.




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