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Happy Charlene (Free verse) by Dovina

Sensuous fluffy clouds wrap the earth in soft embrace where birds sing for joy and all things produce good The earth is a white padded room where all injustice falls before her And any gloom will soon aright She loves it so— a world devoid of hope for good is already accomplished beautiful and purely white

darby pyn 11-Jul-05/7:57 PM
interesting. I missed it. now reading it
back I don't know what I saw.
I still like it.




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