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Happy Charlene (Free verse) by Dovina

Sensuous fluffy clouds wrap the earth in soft embrace where birds sing for joy and all things produce good The earth is a white padded room where all injustice falls before her And any gloom will soon aright She loves it so— a world devoid of hope for good is already accomplished beautiful and purely white

edpeterson 11-Jul-05/5:52 PM
After reading the first line, I though 'ugh'. Not a good start, almost made me run.

I am glad I didn't because the rest is clever and serrated. I wanna be sedated.




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