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paint me a poem (try 2) (Free verse) by nentwined

paint me a picture with countable stanzas, colors that rhyme directly and slant, paint me a plot that stands up for itself, or a moment in time inherently deep; paint me the lines that twist their own language, the form a bit playful, but in essence quite deep; paint me a picture that explains its own being, then takes that same being, and twists it around. paint me a poem that's naked when clothed, with innocent yang and experienced yin, make it sing loudly the chords of the soul and paint it again, and again, and again.

LilMsLadyPoet 11-Jul-05/8:06 AM
WOO-HOO! *clap *clap...take a bow! (Except...don't capitalizations count for anything? If you used punctuation, then why not capital letters?) Gave you a nine anyway....I don't give 10's...at least not yet!




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