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JUST A FEW (Free verse) by rbooey

I REALLY DIDN'T KNOW AT ALL OR HAVE THE SLIGHTEST CLUE EXACTLY WHAT YOU MEANT TO ME I ONLY HOPE YOU KNEW THAT SO MUCH, I DID LOVE YOU MUM AND SO MUCH,I DID CARE AND NOW MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU HERE IS JUST TOO HARD TO BARE I CAN'T BELIEVE YOUR TIME HAS COME THAT GOD HAS CALLED YOUR NAME I'M DEVESTATED,SO ALONE MY LIFE WON'T BE THE SAME I DON'T WAKE UP AND SMILE NO MORE INSTEAD ALL THAT I FEEL IS LONELINESS,AN EMPTY HEART THAT I KNOW TIME WON'T HEAL BECAUSE THERE COULD NOT EVER BE SOMEBODY JUST LIKE YOU WHO MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD INSIDE AND LOVED THE WAY YOU DO I CAN'T ACCEPT IT,THAT YOU'VE GONE I WON'T ACCEPT IT'S REAL BECAUSE THIS CAN'T BE FAIR, OR RIGHT TO CAUSE MY HEART TO FEEL AS THOUGH IT'S JUST BEEN TORN APART CLEAN BROKEN UP IN TWO BECAUSE HE'S TAKEN FROM MY LIFE THE ONLY MUM I KNEW.

Bluemonkey 11-Jul-05/6:28 AM
Actually, i noticed too...and to be honest with you, it's quite annoying.




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