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I Need Not be Told (Free verse) by Chelsio

When I see you all I can do is stare, I now understand how love is unfair. I swim in your eyes and I melt in your skin, An unbridled passion comes from within. I dream of us together but then I wake, To find what had happened had all been fake. I have never felt so empty inside, And I fear my love will never subside. But I need not be told, I already know, That the love I hope for will never be so.

Bluemonkey 6-Jul-05/8:13 AM
better than your other one, I'll give you that.




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