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Born and Fed
(
Free verse
) by
Dovina
A calf comes in with urgesâ get on feet, find a tit, run around. This last, it seems, concerns the calf only for the fun of it, glad and safe, born and fed, worth the effort.
Caducus
6-Jul-05/3:56 AM
tit in line 2 just makes it read wrong.
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