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The taste of something new.
(
Free verse
) by
darby pyn
She sees right through me. I am as transparent as vanity. the new clothes the steep disconnection in my voice. her eyes swell with each kiss goodnight. she knows Iâm never alone.
darby pyn
5-Jul-05/8:56 PM
it's just used as a metaphor. I could have said glass.
I meant it closer to your second analogy.
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