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Born and Fed (Free verse) by Dovina

A calf comes in with urges— get on feet, find a tit, run around. This last, it seems, concerns the calf only for the fun of it, glad and safe, born and fed, worth the effort.

INTRANSIT 5-Jul-05/8:32 AM
D? No offense dear, I think you're trying too hard on this one, and the last. Set aside the cow thing for a while and go read G/Ws stuff. Here's the in door: Cyclical ketchup monstrosity.

P.S. I see cows a lot in my travels but aint put pen to paper yet. glad you did.




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