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The taste of something new. (Free verse) by darby pyn

She sees right through me. I am as transparent as vanity. the new clothes the steep disconnection in my voice. her eyes swell with each kiss goodnight. she knows I’m never alone.

darby pyn 4-Jul-05/2:41 PM

I use the word steep to describe the severity
of the disconnection.

and vanity I always thought as being an obvious
characteristic.
everyone’s interpretation is different but
I thank you for your opinion.




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