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The taste of something new.
(
Free verse
) by
darby pyn
She sees right through me. I am as transparent as vanity. the new clothes the steep disconnection in my voice. her eyes swell with each kiss goodnight. she knows Iâm never alone.
darby pyn
4-Jul-05/2:41 PM
I use the word steep to describe the severity
of the disconnection.
and vanity I always thought as being an obvious
characteristic.
everyoneâs interpretation is different but
I thank you for your opinion.
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