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The taste of something new. (Free verse) by darby pyn

She sees right through me. I am as transparent as vanity. the new clothes the steep disconnection in my voice. her eyes swell with each kiss goodnight. she knows I’m never alone.

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 4-Jul-05/1:03 AM
I thought vanity was quite opaque.

I can't figure out how a disconnection can be steep.





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