poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Object of the Game by Dovina.

fevriere28 Jun 2005

Is rockmage senile? Or just uninspiringly offensive?

Anyways:
I like this poem - thank God it's not another "women suck because they ignore me".. Yaowl. I was just wondering about the repetition of "hurt" and "hurts" - intentional? I don't like it but this could be unfounded dislike.