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My thoughts stumble as I watch them lean into the apex Thrust against chicanes Bank on that complex compound that soft encouraging lip all the while keeping eyes fixed on the leader point of blind curves exit and roll on.
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21-Jun-05/12:53 PM
Well, the good thing is in this poem -chicanes- sonds almost like wind but I think it may be my own ignorance that has done me in this time. I thought they were a series of curves tight and many. I might be wron in which case, I have failed miserably. Sokay. i got a better one brewing. Oh well.
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