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Being Alone (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey

Being alone is a scary place, No one wants to be. You have no control over it, And God, it's happening to me. I sit here in the dark, And let the tears fall down, Waiting for the time, When someone special will come around. And so while I wait, My heart continues to break, For time goes by; And suddenly years fly. And still; I'm waiting.

Blue Magpie 19-Jun-05/10:41 PM
There is a certain lack of the truly poetic here, no real rhyme, rhythm or elegant use of language, if you take the line breaks out it is just a simple statement.




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