poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on This or That by sacred_poet_me.

DoubleU18 Jun 2005

The core consists actually of two lines:
'Will he go to the end of the world for her?
Will he also do household chores for her?'
No real problem to extend the message, but you could have used a bit more humor, more sarcasm.
The last 4 lines add nothing.