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Beach Volleyball (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

The beach-sand, sun, and sea. Castles and coolers and popside sticks. Seaweed, salt, sand everywhere. Crashing waves, laughing kids. A ball, striped like a rainbow, tossed.

sacred_poet_me 15-Jun-05/9:40 PM
I dont know what to give you here. I think this poem is too simple and I think it needs more creativity. So I'll give you a 5. Not bad not good.




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