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naked, she laughed across the bed in a deepening February afternoon and i saw that dawn would bring down cold like outside knows, frozen inside.

Caducus 15-Jun-05/5:03 AM
hey zzinnia long time huh?

I think I get this but 'deepening february afternoon'? If I'm right on my interpretation that line don't sit well.

The last 3 lines could verge into a senryu - mixed on this one but I'm gaga for an explanation.




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