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Beach Volleyball (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

The beach-sand, sun, and sea. Castles and coolers and popside sticks. Seaweed, salt, sand everywhere. Crashing waves, laughing kids. A ball, striped like a rainbow, tossed.

Dovina 14-Jun-05/4:56 PM
Shouldn't that be "Castles and coolers and tight bum flesh"?




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