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Beach Volleyball
(
Free verse
) by
lil_evil_boi
The beach-sand, sun, and sea. Castles and coolers and popside sticks. Seaweed, salt, sand everywhere. Crashing waves, laughing kids. A ball, striped like a rainbow, tossed.
untamed_fierce
14-Jun-05/4:20 PM
Mediocre. Could be improved.
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