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I want you (Free verse) by nicole081083

I want you You want him I don't know what to do I'm going crazy within I want to taste those beautiful lips To feel them pressed gently upon mine And the touch of your fingertips Sends chills up and down my spine He has your kiss He's had it from the start But I'm sure he wouldn't miss Your qualities that stole my heart But you belong to him As we all know There's no way I can win So I have to let go

Blue Magpie 12-Jun-05/11:11 PM
While you may be feeling this very strongly, there is little in it that a reader can enjoy, as far as poetry is concerned.




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