windyone12 Jun 2005
Thanks for your input,however don't assume Why was written for the rankers here.As for going to your poem list and zeroing it?
Ah, the sweet sound of paranoia! Re: 4) At least get it right,it was strife, not life.:-)This poem was written to a paranoid, loves to inflict pain on others s.o.b. because they are a miserable person. A good friend, quite young, who writes poetry and was hovering on the suicidal border, was being reamed by this piece of shit about her poetry at work, and so I immediately wrote it, handed it to the creep and made my friend smile, so shoot me!
Re: Puncuation, yes, I admit it, I suck at it! Who could feel better being hopeless? Hope my puncuation was better on this so you'll like me, you'll really, really like me.
Oh shit. Someone already used that line. Thanks for the offer to join the Dark Side, but an invite wasn't necessary.