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Snow (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

Standing under the frozen sky, feeling a fluffy white and shy. Winter brings cold and frosty nights, all you see are candlelights. When snowflakes are falling very clear, it’s a sign that winter’s near. So quietly and peacefully new snowflakes hit the ground, and form a pure white layer and they never make a sound. All the footprints on the white, are cheering us more than bright. Smelling the sweetness of snow, a breeze flies blow and blow. The soft flakes feel like drops of ice when drifting on my face,and everything feels fresh and clean as I walk through this place. The trees are covered with a coat of freshly fallen snow, some have icy branches that give off a crystal glow. The only sound that I can hear is little wisps of wind. But only for a moment then the air is still again. Standing under the frozen sky, feeling a fluffy white and shy.

zodiac 11-Jun-05/12:16 AM
It is so close to impossible that you and evil_boi could be logging on with the same IP ten minutes apart without knowing each other that it might as well be plain impossible.

I'm not "so concerned" about this. But I think if you're reduced to posting gushing comments on your own poems - to make up for a lack of interest in them, or real gushing comments on them, most likely - then you might as well leave. You'd only be fooling yourself, and not very well at that. And who likes to watch people trying to fool themselves? It's rather like watching some guy at a cocktail party try to get his pants up from around his ankles by furiously jumping up and down.




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