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Snow (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi

Standing under the frozen sky, feeling a fluffy white and shy. Winter brings cold and frosty nights, all you see are candlelights. When snowflakes are falling very clear, it’s a sign that winter’s near. So quietly and peacefully new snowflakes hit the ground, and form a pure white layer and they never make a sound. All the footprints on the white, are cheering us more than bright. Smelling the sweetness of snow, a breeze flies blow and blow. The soft flakes feel like drops of ice when drifting on my face,and everything feels fresh and clean as I walk through this place. The trees are covered with a coat of freshly fallen snow, some have icy branches that give off a crystal glow. The only sound that I can hear is little wisps of wind. But only for a moment then the air is still again. Standing under the frozen sky, feeling a fluffy white and shy.

Dovina 9-Jun-05/8:13 PM
Even though your poem "Faith" is a direct quote from Hebrews 11:1, I take your word for it when you say you learned it from your father and did not copy it from the Bible. If you were a plagiarizer, I think it would have shown up in your other postings too; but as far as I can see it has not. I think everyone should get off your back about this.




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