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Why? (Free verse) by windyone

Why? Do you always criticize because you can't cope? Do you feel better when you take away hope? Writing helps to set us free, it's not just for you,not just for me. Sometimes people are just starting out words can hurt and cut like a knife, be careful my friend to not add to their strife. You don't always know what others are going through, the way that they write is not up to you.

Dovina 9-Jun-05/8:08 PM
The first two lines express an important issue, but not very well. Criticism can help writers who have something to say, say it better. Most of the criticism here does not do that.




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