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on my hog (Haiku) by nentwined

three chambered ka-booms two rocks sitting on pavement fly from my approach

nentwined 8-Jun-05/7:10 AM
I suppose Hog implies Harley too strongly? Triumphs have three cylinders (at least, the thunderbird, and the speed triple... and I think everything else--it's their signature the same as Harley's Po-ta-to).

This is the first serious poem attempt in some time that's gotten consistently not-high marks. Good to happen. Hopefully I'll find something better in it.




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