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on my hog (Haiku) by nentwined

three chambered ka-booms two rocks sitting on pavement fly from my approach

INTRANSIT 8-Jun-05/6:51 AM
To be overly technical:
Three chambered kabooms? Harleys have two cylinders unless the sound is the 3 syllabled Po-ta-to sound . Yes, the approach is confusing. Maybe you don't need one. I'm just haranguessing you. I should talk, I ride a 95 Nighthawk which makes no such audible safety noises.




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