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on my hog (Haiku) by nentwined

three chambered ka-booms two rocks sitting on pavement fly from my approach

Dovina 7-Jun-05/7:16 PM
Rocks only sit on pavement when seven beats are needed in the second line of a haiku. Otherwise they are just on pavement, which sounds better. Damn forms.




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