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he's leaving (Free verse) by eliznhaz

The day will come when you have to leave leave this place where I must stay alone I'll sit and dream of the day that I will once again be able to see, that smile that you always have on your face for me you haven't even left yet and I miss you so much longing every moment for just one touch I know the day you leave I'll be able to do nothing more then cry. Sitting alone in my room I'll want to die.

Dovina 7-Jun-05/12:07 PM
Tender, but too close to the way I really think it will be. Give me imagery to cover my sorrow.




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