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lawngazing (Free verse) by skaskowski

shake me out, i'm a blanket full of broken glass and you need to be warm, and i need to be wrapped round your shoulders to feel safe and secure myself. so shake me free of the busted bottles and mirror, lay me out before you sit down on the grass, it's too wet this time of year, and i need to soak up all of that dew to feel like i belong next to you so lay me out so flat my teeth jut into the soil. bore holes into me if you get thirsty, the well is just a drill away. use my skull as a bucket if you must, relief is just a dip away.

zodiac 4-Jun-05/6:50 AM
How were the bottles busted on a blanket? Not that it matters, I'm just curious.




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