poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Adibe's Song (third-time's-the-charm revision, less Spanish) by zodiac.

Dovina3 Jun 2005

Why is she in the men's residencia?
Is she a she? The scarf implies so.
Why is hermano not Hermano?
Is a hacienda a residencia? Not ordinarily.
Why are housewives in a men's residencia?
Why capital Heaven, but not church?
How does she know tomorrow's headlines?
Last line is good.