poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Swoon by Dovina.

INTRANSIT3 Jun 2005

To reply to the individual items.
#1 You didn'g say "he turns them outward" It sounds like his thumbs are outward.

#2 Breasts as in chests, Your being? Or re-referring to the domes' shape?

#3Irish roman? Or am I unnecessarily crossing wires here?

#4 and 5. Ok.

Maybe I'm REALLY thick. still better off for the dialogue though, thanks.