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ReplyTo a comment on Swoon by Dovina.

Dovina3 Jun 2005

“Dangling hands and outward thumbs”: Stand with your hands dangling at your sides. If someone takes your hands from behind and turns your thumbs outward, then pulls them back, what happens? You rest against his chest.

“Your breasts feel connected or do you?”: I feel connected with the women in my past, and the feeling is also in my breasts.

“Unique line of womanhood”: I’m referring to my ancestry, and never thought of the way you‘ve taken it. It’s funny, really!

“The reality dream ending loses me”: It’s a questionable ending for sure. I meant that the reality of the thing he was describing became so overwhelming that it seemed like a dream – a swoon.

“Facing east”: The direction only matters in the specific setting, and I have no right to expect anyone to know that.

Glad you like it heaps anyway.