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Life and Love (Free verse) by windyone

I sit outside listening to the sounds of the night. The wind rustling the leaves in the trees, the lonesome whistle of a train as it passes by. I watch a spider slowly spinning its web near the light. A symphony of dogs howling as they hear a siren in the distance,long before it reaches my ear. A doe and her fawn as they silently disappear into the meadow across the road. I long for the first rays of sunlight,when I shall return home and see the sweet smiling face of my grandson as he slumbers in his crib,secure in the comfort of our love.

Dovina 31-May-05/9:24 AM
It's good as is, but could be better with just another clue on what you mean. Such clues, if subtle, do not stop a reder from taking it in another direction. I failed in this regard on my recent posting.




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