poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Last Night by Roisin.

DoubleU27 May 2005

<< All the pain only relative,
An evaporation from the mind condenses on her body.
...
To her closed cycle of hurt >>

That 6th line is a true gem. But I feel there is a contradiction between the 5th and the last line. Care to explain, Roisin?