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Birth (Haiku) by nentwined

warm evelopement nurturing bath, burning love ends with explosion

mikejedw 10-May-02/7:18 AM
This is good. It's content suggests more of a senryu than a haiku. It's use of the form is very faithful. Spell checking would've helped ;)




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