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Inspiration from absurdity (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

When finally she'd tired of his grandiose butch she quietly opened ,reached into her clutch, producing a Derringer , jammed it in his eye, pulled the trigger as the crowd gasped: "Oh My! What was that noise?" For she'd shot him you see and sent him for a ride with an E.M.T.

DoubleU 26-May-05/5:52 PM
<< For she'd shot him you see >>

Well...suppose you got a Derringer's barrel poked in the eye and the trigger gets pulled and you scream: "I'm shot! I'm shot!", know what bystanders would say? "That's obvious, isn't it?"
Perhaps the title should be 'The absurdity of the obvious'?

But what I suspect is, I don't know what an E.M.T. is, so I'm probably missing the point. If so, forgive me.




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