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Summer suns April showers Autumn leaves Spring flowers Singing sparrows Hungry squirrels Panting dogs Pretty girls Country walks Busy streets Rolling hills Christmas treats Laughing children Flashing lights Windy mornings Lazy nights Waving flags Splashing fountains Lush grass Powerful mountains Crazy clown Chilled coke Dancing music Happy folk Red robins Glistening snow Frilly shirts Dicky bow Big world Smiling face Good life Nice place CSN 7/81

Frass 31-Aug-02/7:32 PM
I like this, A. I think it very colourfully paints a vibrant feeling and place; it does not lead me into beigeness and empty niceties. The crazy crown is scary, and who is Dicky bow, anyhow? What sport were your referring to with the score, there. Rugby?




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