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Transition (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Crane stands in downpour poke poke poke fishing for crab as sun burns through clouds.

Dental Panic 18-May-05/11:56 PM
I don't think haiku should have something to give away. The universe is not to be tricked. Then again, I don't have a real taste for haiku. They're a bit like sushi to me - I'll aways look around for more.




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