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Transition (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Crane stands in downpour poke poke poke fishing for crab as sun burns through clouds.

INTRANSIT 18-May-05/7:34 PM
Not necessarily...I was originally thinking having the clouds dissipating would be better. Then I chickened out. Endings. My Achilles' heel.




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